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Categories Digital Art > Miscellaneous > Abstract

©2005-2009 ~thedobofdob
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Artist's Comments

This is, in my opinion, my best piece to date, but i still think there is room for improvement so could you give me some constructive critiscism to get rid of any bad bits i haven't noticed.

Program/s: Photoshop only
Stock: Resurgere + sxc.hu
Time: 1 month maybe slightly more

PS: If you would like to make a render like the one in the middle just look for my "photoshop renders" tutorial in my gallery.

thanks all,


~Zeal

EDIT: Fixed the colouring of the top right, made it more like rain which is what it is supposed to be lol.

EDIT 2: Souped it up MAJORLY

EDIT 3: unsouped it majorly :P, styles change lol

EDIT 4: Rotated the lighting so it didn't cover up the huge amount of texture work I did at the top. Added some more texture to the left and got rid of the texture on the background. Got rid of the typo, and made it sharper.

Previous Versions:

Original: [link]
EDITS 1&2: [link]
EDIT 3: [link]
EDIT 4: Current.

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~Bisqui May 8, 2005, 3:48:50 AM
Awesome , that takes alot of time

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!aberrate May 8, 2005, 4:54:46 AM
Absolutely amazing. Definitely your best piece yet, beautiful.

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~19-10 May 8, 2005, 6:16:20 AM
That's a nice style... Hmmm, over at the top it feels a bit weird, maybe a bit too much contrast or crowded. Other than that, great. keep it up :)
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~redniet May 8, 2005, 9:02:18 AM
i think the colors and lighting and everything, but 1 small thing i thought could make this better, if the main ' photoshop render ' was more in focus, or stood out more, and wasnt being covered by all that texture, but thats not that big of a problem it still looks great
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!aberrate May 8, 2005, 10:18:45 AM
Looks even better now :).

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~Defcon-1 May 8, 2005, 2:51:41 PM
wow, it is your best

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but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones"

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~Korpus- May 10, 2005, 2:31:32 PM
Sexy, but could be done a little better.
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~Lux78 May 12, 2005, 3:16:14 PM
Great piece, very relaxing and organically abstract if that was what you were aiming for. I think there shuold be more of that splashing of bright colours to add some energy into the scene.

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~strukt May 13, 2005, 1:05:21 PM
not sure what needs to be worked out but its preety cool
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